Saturday, February 24, 2007

HOLLIDAY SCRIPT , PART 1

COPYRIGHT AND TRADEMARK: BILL WOODCOCK, JR. and GREGORY C GIORDANO.

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HOLLIDAY – 16 Page story- installment 1; for the upcoming POPGUN ANTHOLOGY by IMAGE COMICS.

FINAL DRAFT

PAGE ONE

The sequence begins with Wyatt and Virgil Earp and crew at the Sanitarium in Glenwood Springs, Colorado.

1.Establishing Shot of Sanitarium, exterior. Spring landscape. CAPTION: GLENWOOD SPRINGS, COLORADO. 1887.

2.Panel of Wyatt, Virgil, and Priest in the room where Doc died. Wyatt is smoking.
Wyatt indicates an empty bed.

WYATT: “THIS WHERE DOC DIED? THAT BED THERE? “

PRIEST: “SENOR HOLLIDAY? HE WAS A PHYSICIAN? I DIDN’T KNOW.”

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5 comments:

Bill Woodcock said...

SCRIPT UP TO PAGE SEVEN. MADE CHANGES TO FIRST DRAFT.

flameape said...

i updated blog to reflect that just now.
peace out.

Bill Woodcock said...

Just updated to PAGE ELEVEN.

Bill Woodcock said...

JUST UPDATED TO PAGE THIRTEEN, PLUS MADE INTERNAL PLOT AND DIALOGUE CHANGES.

Bill Woodcock said...

FINISHED. FINAL TALLY: SIXTEEN PAGES, SO WE ARE 4 PAGES OVER. HOWEVER, A LOT OF THE ADDITIONS ARE JUST ACTION DETAILS, WHICH I THINK ARE NECESSARY, BUT DON'T INVOLVE A LOT OF DRAFTING. I'VE GONE OVER IT AND I CAN'T REDUCE THE SCRIPT DOWN ANY MORE. THIS IS THE MINIMUM NEEDED TO ADEQUATELY TELL THE STORY.