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HOLLIDAY – 16 Page story- installment 1; for the upcoming POPGUN ANTHOLOGY by IMAGE COMICS.
FINAL DRAFT
PAGE ONE
The sequence begins with Wyatt and Virgil Earp and crew at the Sanitarium in Glenwood Springs, Colorado.
1.Establishing Shot of Sanitarium, exterior. Spring landscape. CAPTION: GLENWOOD SPRINGS, COLORADO. 1887.
2.Panel of Wyatt, Virgil, and Priest in the room where Doc died. Wyatt is smoking.
Wyatt indicates an empty bed.
WYATT: “THIS WHERE DOC DIED? THAT BED THERE? “
PRIEST: “SENOR HOLLIDAY? HE WAS A PHYSICIAN? I DIDN’T KNOW.”
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SCRIPT UP TO PAGE SEVEN. MADE CHANGES TO FIRST DRAFT.
i updated blog to reflect that just now.
peace out.
Just updated to PAGE ELEVEN.
JUST UPDATED TO PAGE THIRTEEN, PLUS MADE INTERNAL PLOT AND DIALOGUE CHANGES.
FINISHED. FINAL TALLY: SIXTEEN PAGES, SO WE ARE 4 PAGES OVER. HOWEVER, A LOT OF THE ADDITIONS ARE JUST ACTION DETAILS, WHICH I THINK ARE NECESSARY, BUT DON'T INVOLVE A LOT OF DRAFTING. I'VE GONE OVER IT AND I CAN'T REDUCE THE SCRIPT DOWN ANY MORE. THIS IS THE MINIMUM NEEDED TO ADEQUATELY TELL THE STORY.
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